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A titleless poem

發表於 : 週三 10月 30, 2013 1:48 am
陳翊寧
He looks at me, with his pair of sad eyes.
Within nothing joy indeed.
There's still a far way from him.
Not only a river and a bridge.
Did I see love passing away at that moment?
I close my eyes, dare not look.

Re: A titleless poem

發表於 : 週六 1月 18, 2014 12:44 pm
麵糰仔
Please work on your punctuation and grammar (e.g. tenses) otherwise the poem wouldn't make sense.
After all, titless doesn't mean pointless, right? 圖檔