Love of this kind part2


版主: 麵糰仔

[FONT=Calibri]Focus, onthe bright and intelligent eyes of hers.[/FONT]
[FONT=Calibri]The skinand flesh of her, like the evil, tempted to commit crimes.[/FONT]
[FONT=Calibri]There shelies, on the river of mine.[/FONT]
[FONT=Calibri]Theflowing water, bathes the fresh figure of hers.[/FONT]
[FONT=Calibri]She, withgolden and fluid, river of hair, smiles sweetly[/FONT]
[FONT=Calibri]Withbright red on her cheeks.[/FONT]
[FONT=Calibri]Broad inher figure, the heart is still in her chest.[/FONT]
[FONT=Calibri]The loveshe gave, as warm as blood in vein.[/FONT]
[FONT=Calibri]At thistime, [/FONT]
[FONT=Calibri]I knew ,she is mine.[/FONT]
[FONT=Calibri]I knew,she didn't feel the pain.[/FONT]
Again there are spacing problems, please fix.

Though the poem starts with the word "focus",
I find it rather obscure and pointless.