A man and his wife

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A manasks his wife
"SometimesI just don't understand
Why Ialways chase after love, in a hard way
Butalways find that love is still running to somewhere that I haven't beento."
His wifeanswers
"Thatis marriage."

Hmm...very strange spacing...
Would you fix that?

Or you did it on purpose?
我也不知道
我只是貼上而已就變成這樣了
what about the poem?
A man asks his wife
"Sometimes I just don't understand
Why I always chase after love, in a hard way
But always find that love is still running to somewhere that I haven't been to."
His wife answers
"That is marriage."
sharline1031 寫:A man asks his wife
"Sometimes I just don't understand
Why I always chase after love, in a hard way
But always find that love is still running to somewhere that I haven't been to."
His wife answers
"That is marriage."
Okay, that's better.

To be honest, I don't find this poem particularly creative.
After reading this, it sort of gives you a feeling like, "Uh well, okay, so?"

I'm not married, not yet.
But I really think that chasing after love after beeing married sounds really odd.
Is that guy in the poem not in love with his wife or are you saying their love is fading away?

Overall, a logical poem.
Thant's all.

I would expect something more deviant.
我想表達的是
婚姻中隨著時間喪失的愛情冷卻和疲憊感