Love of this kind part2

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Love of this kind part2

文章陳語鈴 發表於 週三 4月 24, 2013 1:53 am

 

Focus, onthe bright and intelligent eyes of hers.
The skinand flesh of her, like the evil, tempted to commit crimes.
There shelies, on the river of mine.
Theflowing water, bathes the fresh figure of hers.
She, withgolden and fluid, river of hair, smiles sweetly
Withbright red on her cheeks.
Broad inher figure, the heart is still in her chest.
The loveshe gave, as warm as blood in vein.
At thistime,
I knew ,she is mine.
I knew,she didn't feel the pain.
自小被教育成一個乖學生,乖女兒。成長過程中發現唯一能叛逆的管道是創作。未來立志成為創作人。
無創作不歡の我: 喜愛各式創作,包括小說、詩、歌詞、樂曲、翻譯、好書評論、影評等。
個人粉專: https://www.facebook.com/neverwithoutcreation
個人blog: http://sharline1031.pixnet.net/blog
或者: http://episode.cc/about/neverwithoutcreation
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Re: Love of this kind part2

文章麵糰仔 發表於 週日 5月 05, 2013 11:37 am

 

Again there are spacing problems, please fix.

Though the poem starts with the word "focus",
I find it rather obscure and pointless.
Some write to remember; some write to forget.
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