Mockingclock

外語文學翻譯或外語文學創作
每日限貼兩篇

版主: 麵糰仔

Mention what marked.
Dark secret kept the darkness.
When slim thin tin hippo telephone ringing,
Tic-tac the slipping age caged gonna cacanny.
Tic on, tang-on. the life applies for quiet fine mind.
With an ancient division of time
equal to two hours, the clock praised.
When the sailor beg for go aboard, the missing rangers ride for their mission.
When the love locked once upon the time, the trance
Freeze decades and decades. just the heat minute like the model like skin.
Then the bitter meal taken with thee with sweet.

我喜歡此詩
最後出現"thee"這字 :idea:

我還被提過應該乾脆也出現thay.
然後用好的優美的英文,比如
Dark secret in the darkness kept.
while slim tin hippo telephone hippo, it rings,
又或者
Freeze decades by. the moment like the model or skin.
And meal bitterly finished with thee with thay sweet.

諸如此類.

對,優美的英文.fine utterance.