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文章天陽 發表於 週日 1月 07, 2018 7:33 pm

 

  那是一口井,淺淺的,在孩童可以攀爬下去的高度,裡面沒有水的乾井。

  「志揚,今天放學要去打球嗎?」端坐在椅子上,一顆小紙球砸到了桌面,志揚攤開紙,鉛筆歪七扭八的字跡讓他知道是死黨冠豪所扔的。
  趁著老師轉身寫黑板的空檔,他飛快的扭頭對後方的冠豪扮鬼臉,讓冠豪氣得哇哇叫。
  「今天要念的課文是……」一陣電鑽聲蓋過老師的解說,同學你看我我看你,膽子較大的已經跑到窗邊看外面發生什麼事。
  「好像是涼亭在施工!」冠豪伸出手,半個身子探出窗戶,指向學校涼亭的方向,老師嚇得連忙衝過去把他拉進來,避免直接摔出窗戶。
  「在做什麼啊!張冠豪你放學留下來。」老師氣急敗壞的命令,才剛說完,放學鐘聲便響了,冠豪只能苦著一張臉站在導師座位旁,看著死黨志揚衝出教室遊玩。
  今日放學志揚不像以往衝向球場,而是轉向涼亭,避開施工處,繞到一個隱密的角落。
  說是涼亭,但學校建立的是生態池,石頭池子內還沒灌水,孩童們都喜歡在上面跳著玩耍。
  志揚的目標,是昨日下課發現的一口井,被大人用鐵欄杆圍起,但他有爬上欄杆看過,並不深,而且是乾的。
  而且井底的某側,還有一個洞口,不知道通往何處的地洞。
  左右看了幾眼,他很快把書包拋入井裡,隨即翻過欄杆,踩穩井口邊確認落地處後一放手-
  小小的身軀穩穩落入井底,志揚拉過書包推入洞,學著電視上的節目把小手電筒咬在嘴巴,彎腰四肢著地的爬進洞口。
  這個地洞會通往什麼地方呢?志揚難掩興奮的想,洞穴黑漆漆,布滿落葉與灰塵泥土,沒爬多遠,小孩乾淨的衣褲沾滿塵土。
  「奇怪……」揉揉鼻子,志揚聞到一股潮濕的氣味,通道依舊筆直,感覺自己爬了段時間,卻還沒到出口。
  好奇心逐漸被未知的恐懼淹沒,志揚慌亂的想轉身走原路回去,猛然一抬頭-
  「痛!」眼前一黑,志揚最後看到手電筒燈光一閃而逝。
  
  「你怎麼會跑到這裡?」語帶不悅的質問在耳邊響起,他迷迷糊糊的呻吟,睜開眼,看到了一位青年。
  穿著像古裝劇中一樣的長長衣服,青年伸出手把他抓起,又問:「我問,你怎麼跑進來這裡的!」
  「這裡?」他看了看四周,碧綠的草皮、微風輕輕吹拂,自己好像忘記了什麼,一種懶洋洋的感覺擴散,他笑嘻嘻地回答:「我也不知道~」
  青年瞪著他,語氣更嚴肅了:「快回去,你不能來這裡。」
  「為什麼?」莫名的被責罵,他感到一股委屈與不開心:「這裡的風吹起來好舒服。」
  青年瞪大眼,似乎有些錯愕:「這裡舒服?你看到了什麼?」青年抓住了他的手,帶著他開始往前走。
  「我看到很漂亮的草地,還有點點亮亮的螢火蟲。」他開心的揮舞手,想去抓草地裡的發光物。
  「不准去碰!」青年音量陡然拔高,直接抓起他大步奔走,來到草地盡頭的懸崖。
  「回去你該回去的地方。」拎著他的後衣領,青年把他懸空在無止盡的懸崖上,不顧他的瑟瑟發抖,一把放開。
  「啊!」他淒厲的慘叫。

  「志揚……志揚你在哪裡。」
  「監視錄影器調了嗎?他有離開學校嗎?」
  「沒有啊,到底是躲到哪裡去了。」
  志揚聽到很多大人的呼喚聲,模模糊糊的,他睜開眼,四周一片漆黑。
  突然,一束光照到他的臉上,他刺痛的瞇起眼,緊接著是許多興奮地呼喊。
  「老師!志揚在井裡的洞穴中。」是冠豪的聲音。
  隨即,他被一雙手抓住拖離洞穴,來到外頭,志揚這才知道,從井裡的洞口通道的地方是生態池下方的一個洞,那兩個洞是互通的。
  幸好……生態池還沒灌水,否則他爬一爬會一頭栽入水中。
  此刻,以月牙高掛天際,所有大人鬆口氣,媽媽推開人群衝過來一把抓住耳朵,破口大罵。
  無奈的接受教訓,志揚猛然發現,自己手中好像抓了一個圓圓的物品.低頭一看。
  「啊!」是一顆骷顱頭。

  「你當年幹的白痴事,可不少呢!」媽媽冷哼一聲,端了兩杯果汁給志揚與冠豪,兩人窩在房間,聊起了國小的回憶。
  「你怎麼知道我在井裡的洞穴?」出來後太過混亂,志揚現在才想到問冠豪,為何全部的大人都找不到他時,冠豪卻很明確知道。
  「因為我們是生死與共、穿同一條褲子長大的好兄弟啊~」冠豪手臂勾上志揚的脖子,親密的嬉鬧:「我當然知道你躲到那裡想探險,真是太好笑了哈哈哈。」
  「哼,你也幹過不少比我自障的事。」志揚不甘示弱,開始抖出對方童年的糗事:「小五那年,你還跑去抓榕樹氣根想玩泰山遊戲,差點摔成笨蛋。」
  「那不是我,明明是你啊!」兩人互相推鬧起來,吵出不少往事。
  吵累了,志揚疲憊地喝著果汁,好想念國小的校園,那棵大榕樹、轉角的花牆、充滿石子的生態池與木造涼亭。
  「下次,回國小看看吧,說不定改了很多地方。」
  「沒問題。」
  
天陽
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文章ocoh 發表於 週四 1月 18, 2018 1:41 pm

 

教人好奇文中另一個世界為何事
朋友間的默契能夠引起讀者的共鳴
唯文章好像失了焦點
有如一個不完整的故事

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